R. S. Downie |
In 2004 Ruth Downie won the Fay Weldon section of BBC3’s End of Story competition. Novels include Ruso and the Disappearing Dancing Girls and Ruso and the Demented Doctor. She is married with two sons and lives in Milton Keynes.
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A messy and mysterious process
You’d think I’d have got the hang of this by now. After all, I’ve done it three times already. Ruso and the Demented Doctor, the second escapade for my Roman Army medic, will appear in paperback any day now. Penguin plan to publish the third, Ruso and the Root of All Evils, early next year. Meanwhile, I’m working on the fourth.
It’s strange how we choose the wrong things to worry about. Not long ago, I was a private scribbler stunned by a publishing contract. The thought of publicity was embarrassing (didn’t my mother always say it was ‘not nice to put yourself forward’?) and I couldn’t imagine ever anticipating literary festivals or meeting readers without absolute terror. In fact, meeting people turned out to be fun. But what I could imagine – what I’d expected - was that once I’d written several novels, I’d know what I was doing. Surely it gets easier as you go on?
Er… no. As I launch into writing the next book, it’s just as scary as ever.
Paul Theroux wisely described writing fiction as a ‘messy and mysterious process’. Despite my efforts to tidy it up – I’ve got a room to work in now, where the debris of failed Plot Outlines and Diary Plans can be stashed away under the desk – each start is no less chaotic than the last.
The endings aren’t much clearer. A novel, it seems, is never really finished. It just gets taken away and shown to everyone else when the editor decides it’s reached an acceptable point. This is undoubtedly a good thing. Without that discipline I’d still be playing with Book One, although probably not improving it.
Instead, it’s my job to create a whole new story. This is a strangely insecure feeling, even if the new plan seemed like a great idea when the editor agreed to it. It reminds me of the moment when Husband and I arrived home from the hospital with a new baby and realised there had been a dreadful mistake. Somebody had left us in charge of this thing by accident, and we’d better take it straight back to the experts before we broke it.
Every new start is a launch into the unknown. Even if you’re writing a series, you’ve never tackled this mountain from this particular angle before. Maybe this time the journey will turn out to be as exciting as it seemed when it was a brilliant idea in the middle of the night. Maybe it’s impossible to get to the top from here and you’ll have to stop halfway up and start all over again. Maybe a kindly editor will extend the deadline while you retreat to plan a new approach, and maybe not. And maybe that creaking noise you can hear is the sound of an overloaded metaphor falling apart. Sorry.
With luck, though, some sort of miracle occurs between the private dithering over the choice of one word or another, and the final submission. A story emerges. It’s polished by the editor and several unsung others, gets a smart jacket with a photo of a tidied-up author, goes through journeys and processes I can’t begin to imagine, and ends up on the bookshelf. After that, it’s on its own.
Hopefully the story will be adopted by a reader who’s willing to take the risk of spending several hours with it. To everyone who’s taken, or will take, that risk with the Ruso books, I’m enormously grateful. I’m never entirely sure where we’re going, but I hope we’ll enjoy each other’s company on the journey.
The author of Ruso and the Disappearing Dancing Girls and Ruso and the Demented Doctor talks to us about Famous Five and Biggles and how Ioan Gruffudd would be the perfect Ruso...
What is the first novel you remember reading?
The Famous Five – I forget which. They had a girl called George, which for some reason I found very impressive.
Which novel do you wish you’d written?
If Nobody Speaks of Remarkable Things, by Jon McGregor
Pick one: first person or third person?
Third for mysteries – it’s useful to be able to use another point of view.
Has any thriller ever made you sleep with the lights on?
No, but I’m a wimp and don’t like to read anything too scary.
Pick one: series or standalone?
Series.
If stranded on a desert island, which fictional character would you most want to be stranded with, and why?
Ray Mears is real, so it’ll have to be Biggles. Before long Algy and Ginger would fly in and rescue us.
When you begin writing, do you know the ending?
Yes, but sometimes I surprise myself halfway through.
Who would you like to play Ruso in a movie adaptation?
What a lovely question. You wouldn’t believe the time I could spend fantasising over this one. Robert Bathurst has a wonderfully exasperated expression but he doesn’t look very Mediterranean, does he? Choosing George Clooney would just be too obvious. How about Colin Firth? Jeremy Northam’s rather gorgeous. Ioan Gruffudd? Excuse me, I need to go and lie down quietly.
Pick one: Sherlock Holmes or Hercule Poirot?
No thanks, I’d still prefer Ioan Gruffudd.
What’s your top tip for new writers?
Find friends who write, and read each other’s stuff. It’s a great way to learn.
Writer’s Bottom and other worries...
The written word is an amazing thing. Ruso is travelling to places I’ll never see, and having relationships with people I’ll never have the privilege of meeting. He’s currently lodging in homes in Montreal and Morecambe, Sydney and San Francisco, Ormskirk and Enniskillen, and he’s even had a brief encounter with the New York Times bestseller list.
Meanwhile back here, the garden is still full of weeds, the pond full of newts and there’s a pile of ironing stuffed behind the sofa. While Ruso and Tilla are off gallivanting, I sit at the PC drinking too much coffee and developing an expanding case of Writer’s Bottom. Frankly I wish one or other of them would take the time to pop home and tell me the plot of Book Two, which is proving no easier to write than Book One, but I suppose they’re too busy enjoying themselves.
Perhaps I shouldn’t begrudge them their freedom. They did, after all, spend many years hidden away in the bottom drawer of the desk, waiting to see if anybody was going to take the trouble to finish them off.
In fact if I had known what was going to happen to them, not only would I have refused to believe it but I’d probably have run away. It’s all very well to be bold when it’s just you and the PC, but when you find out that lots of people are going to read what you’ve written, and those people are going to include real classicists, aficionados of crime fiction and your Mum, it’s very different. So when the agent rang to say, ‘I thought I ought to let you know what’s going on down here…’ the exhilaration was mingled with terror.
Of course most of the things I was worrying about never happened. My Mum would probably have liked it whatever I’d written, because Mums are like that. One classicist pointed out a particularly daft error in time for it to be corrected for the paperback. Reviewers were gentle and despite Ruso’s forthright opinions on Roman Britain, the group of readers I met near Chester were very friendly. Plus I’ve just had one of those weird experiences.
You don’t have to spend long in the company of writers before someone will tell you about an odd coincidence between writing and reality, or about inventing things and then finding out they’re true. One of the things I worried about was the minutiae of the research. Little things that might spoil the flow for readers who know more about Roman Britain than novelists do. I did get kindly and well-informed souls to check the manuscript, but one of the things that slipped through was the mention of steps up the outside of the amphitheatre wall. Now, I’ve seen reconstruction pictures of Chester amphitheatre. I’ve been to visit the amphitheatres still standing at Nimes and Arles. Not one of them has external steps - what was I thinking of when I wrote about them? I don’t know. Last week I went back to Chester and visited the new excavations. They’ve found evidence of steps up the outside of the amphitheatre wall. Weird.
Pretty soon I’m hoping to hear that someone’s dug up Merula’s bar, the fish-faced fountain and the Laundry on the East Road, which I put there not because I’m aware of any evidence for it, but because I couldn’t imagine six thousand legionaries all doing their own washing. As I said, the written word is an amazing thing. If something ought to exist and there is no evidence that it didn’t, you can create it with a few taps of fingers on the keyboard.
One of my other worries about being a published author was that people would expect me to be interesting. The sad truth, I’m afraid, is that I’m much better on paper. If I were interesting in real life, I wouldn’t have to sit here making things up, would I? What is interesting – to me, at least – is the odd things you turn up when you’re trying to find out what it would have been like to live in Roman Britain. The latest discovery is that given a choice between runner bean seedlings and a mature woad plant, nine out of ten snails prefer woad. I can’t see how this is going to be of much use in a novel, but it’s very handy for the garden. Yesterday it struck me that the Druids may have resorted to the oral tradition not only because it kept their knowledge secret, but because if you live in a society where artificial light is expensive, smelly and inefficient, it’s convenient to have instant access to all your information after dark.
The best recent discovery came when I was asked to do a talk about The Romans to a group of seven and eight year olds. Now, I have an intimate knowledge of the patterns on the sides of Roman box flue tiles (the sort used to channel the heating through the walls in bath-houses). I have been known to seek them out in museums and photograph them and frankly I think they’re fascinating (I did say I was more interesting on paper). However, the chances of finding any like-minded seven year olds seemed rather slim, so in desperation I turned to Visual Aids, Things to Handle and Dressing Up. In the course of this, I learned that a traditional second-century outfit is just the thing for a person of my shape. Maybe I’m wrong to have an independent-minded heroine. Maybe while their menfolk were out running the Empire, the women of Roman Britain stayed at home like me, quietly developing Writer’s Bottom.
